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Monday, 3 December 2012

Final Storyline Proposal

Horror:
Pick Me Up- 2 minute version
At the beginning three girls will be shown walking through a derelict field. Girl A suggests that they should play a game of hide and seek and Girl Ais "on". Girls B and C wander towards the trees, to hide, whilst girl A counts. Unbeknown to the girls they are being watched by a man in a mask. As Girls B and C are walking away (to hide), Girl A screams and cries. This is because the masked man is grasping Girl and throwing her into a van. After a few seconds the man in the mask climbs out of the van holding a bloody knife.
The other girl's heard her calling/screaming but ignored her just believing the screams were a way of cheating, and therefore carry on with their game.
The van is seen driving away. The two girls realise and start to find each other in panic (screaming and starting to cry).
 
Full film version
Start: The girls are shown on the phone to one another planning a sleepover, whilst there is a cut to a separate scene of an over the shoulder shot where the man is looking on Facebook at the girls profile's.
Middle: The next day the girls are shown playing there game of hide and seek, where Amy is taken away and stabbed.
The two friends are shown running and trying to ring her, with a shot afterwards of the girls bloody hand and mobile next to her limp and lifeless body. The girls go back to her house to see if she has gone home but no one answers the door, as they begin to become frantic with worry and start to walk back to the field.
End: A van slowly pulls up and follows the girls down the hill, they start to walk faster, realising that the van is following them. The van then comes to a standstill and the masked man gets out of the van, the girls slowly turn around as the man withdraws a knife and begins to chase them, they scream but no one acknowledges them, and are left running for their lives down the steep hill to one of the girls houses, however she has no key and no one is in. As they are chased they split up and hide and as one of them is killed, the other girl hears her piercing screams and quietly runs away as fast as she can, but to no avail as she is heard and is hunted down like a deer she is ripped open by the knife and is left lying in the dark alley alone with her insides on the outside. The man stalks away and blends with the shadows, happy with his work.



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